PLANNING - Pitch Feedback

When presenting our pitch, the only feedback we was given was to make our storyboard longer since it did not have many shots. We explained that we did not have much in our storyboard because we were in the mist of changing our plot line.
To improve, we brainstormed a mass of shots we would use for the different parts of our opening and we decided to focus on using more close ups to create more tension.